Just from the Introduction, I was happy to finally hear discussion about technology. The first chapter sort of covered (for me) the idea that technology is inevitable and although I’m not sure the computer is the same thing as the pencil, I do agree that it is a tool for composition, and even further, creativity—just as the pencil is. Chapter two, while mostly about essay form, did bring in structural issues and postmodern theory, which I found relevant.
On to Chapter 5, “Petals on a Wet Black Bough.” While I find the pseudonym clever and the hypertextual effect of the essay interesting, I had mixed feelings about this one. First of all, I’m not sure the hypertext form fits with the print medium (here) and may have even added to the point that collaboration can be confusing and messy (and inevitably lead to this loss of authorship). I, for one, did not know who was speaking when (which may have been their point) and sometimes the text was all-over-the-place-hard-to-follow. What I did find interesting was how they went into postmodern theory as the dismantling of “self” and that point of multi-authorship is what I find intriguing, that by joining knowledge with someone else or society as a whole, we are making more of a difference, exploring and even approaching the platonic dialectic of knowledge. As was mentioned in one of the articles I read last week, we never write “alone” even when we think we do, all the people, experiences, and conversations we have ever met/had influence us, so we are socially constructing ideas. I also liked the point about “print uploaded” (102), since the point of multimodal is to compose texts in a different way—take advantage of the technology, visuals, etc. to make “text” more than words. Also Turkle’s encouragement to “experience the computer as an expressive medium” and calling it a “romantic postmodern vision of computer intelligence.” (105) Well, and of course the mention of Bush’s memex and hypertexts linear/non-linear/multi-linear uses and possibilities and the comparisons to cinematography with regards to exploiting technology (112). Oh yeah, and the poem. And terms like “compositionists” (113) and “multiple textualities” (113). Not to mention, clever ending.
Chapter six began with a clever title, a quote from Gunther Kress and bel hooks’ emphasis on the visual as an integral part of our culture, and therefore literacy, and Trainspotting posters… how could Diane and Diana go wrong? I was hooked. “Critical literacy in a postmnodern age demands that we acknowledge our role in and take responsibility for language and form and image and communication systems in a way that not only critiques but envisions new possibilities.” (126) And I liked the concluding idea of a compass that points in all different directions at once.
I realize now (a bit late) that I should have structured these by topic. Oh well, next up is section two, teaching and access. My favorite here was the Sosnoski essay. While I think access is an important issue, I just felt it was continually being pointed out that poor people have less than wealthy people—not exactly a new concept—with no real solutions offered. We know budgets are often lacking for technology that could enhance our classrooms, not to mention k-12 classrooms. I know I can’t afford a mac or a laptop, but I can’t complain because I do have internet access (although it is dial-up), software I need, and access to a lab equipped with what I need to do my job.
“Hyper-readers” though I found interesting because I am one of those people who would rather not read on screen and have always felt I was “cheating” if I skimmed or pecked my way through books or articles. This article got me thinking, though, about how graduate school has changed this attitude for me. The New Media Reader, for example, was meant to be “hyper-read,” offering “links” to other chapters or sections of information, as well as some articles with multiple levels of engagement, so you could “skim” without really skimming. More like researching on the web, where you peruse for valuable information before engaging in in-depth reading, I find I now skim titles, subtitles, key words, authors, and book jackets to see if the information being offered is worth my time (and relevant to my thesis). For example, I was drawn to Cooper’s article because of postmodern in the title. And I did find the discussion interesting; it just wasn’t valuable for my current purpose (although a colleague is doing asynchronous discussion in her thesis). I also related to Sosnoski’s filming section (169) and found the comparison to “hyper(media)texts” and the meaning found in graphics and video. Sosnoski also talks about fragmenting, specifically the creators of Storyspace claim that association of fragments, or bits and pieces, are the way we make sense of information, which I think is true. When we read something in-depth that has no connection to previous knowledge, we (or I) don’t remember it. When bits are connected to each other (tied together say with string from one pedagogical theory to another) it makes sense. Realistically, he adds a section about rain clouds on the horizon, accurately pointing out that hyper-reading (and, thus, hypertexts) will be seen as not serious and lacking depth. This connects to an ongoing discussion about scholarly texts online not being taken seriously, as well as online journals, and BACK (and FORWARD) to the articles about access. Just because information is free doesn’t mean it isn’t valuable. I did like the Bruce article though because it comments on the others and asked some important questions. All in all, I do think technology should influence the way we teach and learn.
I found connections to collaborative pedagogy (in the Myka Vielstimmig), technological (in most of them), process and expressive (even references to Peter Elbow), Feminist (in the access ones… not in a feminism sense), and WAC (more subtle), and Basic (again mostly in the access themed articles but also the essayist one).
Taking stock: hmmm. I agree that there is alot of reading but these ten articles went down alot easier than the composition pedagogy ones (or perhaps I’m just becoming more of a hyper-reader… kidding). And I seem to be making alot of margin notes concerning my thesis, so all in all I’m finding most of the reading helpful. I’m also seeing connections between theories and theorists with the additional aspect of technology which I’m anxious to get to even more (ok, the pencil article was slow for me…). I like the hyper-map we have going and see how the connections will assist me with my own teaching as well as my writing and developing my ideas about electronic composition which I hope to study/write/teach more in the future. The journal assignment sounds good and I have looked at one issue of mine, read part of it, and am curious to read more. I have mostly been interested in the creative aspects of new media writing, and so the more academic side is good for me (my journal is online). I must admit I’m a bit nervous about presenting my findings to the class (you’d think I’d get over this public speaking thing what with teaching and all…) but I look forward to hearing the others. And this is by far my favorite class this semester!!! oh, wait… it’s my only class… well, it would be my favorite anyway!